The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/16
"Neither rain, sleet, snow nor hail, shall keep him from his appointed duty" or something like that! It took me a while to clue in, but that was a good thing. The build-up of tension made the story that much better. Well done.
02/26/16
You did a good job of building suspense in this entry.
03/02/16
Today Michigan had a major snow storm. I could really relate to the tension in the trip.

Well done!
03/03/16
Congratulations, Raymond, on your 2nd place in the beginners category. You have a real flare for descriptive detail.
03/03/16
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish.