The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/16
This is a beautiful testimony that touched my hearts
02/26/16
It was a good testimony, but to me it needed more focus. It seemed to ramble all over the place.
03/01/16
I thought your ending was very fitting. The testimony was heartfelt.

The flow of your story sometimes suffered from a lack of focus.