The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/16
I truly enjoyed this story. This is a small thing, but I can't picture a husband telling his wife she's indefatigable. It just is not an everyday word, I think.
This is a good testimony. People tend to watch one's actions rather than listen to mere words. As the saying goes,"Actions speak louder than words."
God bless.
02/20/16
What a witness Joy was to Susan, I'm glad she was able to share the gospel.
02/24/16
I loved your story. There was a freshenss to it that caught me up in Joy's passion.
I know with only 750 words we can only skim the surface of a story- but it had depth. I hope you are relentless in your practice of writing.