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He certainly had a right to be fatigued! I enjoyed your tale.
Awww...great story, well done.

The MC had more to do in one day than most people do in a week. I'm exhausted just from reading.

Try to spell out numbers ten and below for easier reading.
What a loving father and husband you are to your family.

It takes a special person to care for others.

Thank you for sharing.
I can hear a 'well done good and faithful servant coming on'. I enjoyed reading your story.
Although not his real name, "Josh" was a real person, and the details here are true according to my experience. Last Thursday was the busiest day for him.
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