The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/16
Some good associations between spiritual & physical food. "Meaty!" Maybe it'd be strengthened by an intro paragraph that said where you were going with the article, something like the bold bit at the start of a newspaper article, which is a brief wrap-up of what's going to be expanded upon.
02/17/16
Great job with the topic in delivery and content!

Blessings~
02/18/16
You had some excellent scripture to back up your writing. I think you need an introductory paragraph to add cohesiveness to the piece.
02/18/16
I liked how you brought in scripture. Nice job.
03/13/16
A very good of writing. Well done. Great association. Thank you for your comments. Amen.