The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/16
I got hungry reading your poem about delicious treats.
02/11/16
My favourite line to evoke "delicious": "and dream my way through it"! Nice.
02/15/16
I just gained five pounds reading your poem (just kidding)! Great job!
02/16/16
wow wanted to sit in your kitchen.
I did enjoy the examples you gave.
Wished you had quoted more directly scripture.
I liked it.
02/17/16
Yummy! Great imagery here!

Blessings~