The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/16
Well done, great job with the topic. I enjoyed this heartwarming story.

God bless~
02/05/16
A good story, but a number of errors in grammar and punctuation, incomplete sentences etc. These things make a story harder to follow and distract from the message. Often a close proofreading will eliminate many of these issues.
Nicely written story of many even today. The unanswered question: "Where to today?"

It is stories like these that get us to thinking. Will we be next? Am I on the list? What would I do?