The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/16
Beautifully written with a great message!

God bless~
01/28/16
A well written story. Your entry should do well.

God bless -
Good job on the article. Belonging to God, sure makes the difference.
Amen! What a beautiful message and story. Reminds me of how I felt when I found the church I call home today. Good luck and God bless xo
02/02/16
Touching story. I'm so happy the MC found the family she needed.
This was just one week in Joan's life. You could use her and develop more of her life as it would pertain to work and more aspects of how she began to "fit in" with her new surroundings.

Keep writing.
02/04/16
This was a wonderful story. I felt the loneliness of being away from family and the comfort and joy that came as Joan grew with her new family. It was so reassuring to see how God includes us in His family, we just need to receive His gift. Thank you for a wonderful story!