The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovingly crafted story. You held my attention from beginning to end. I did see where the story was going about half way through, but found it a lovely read anyway.
Such a tender story. You held my attention all through. I guessed from the beginning what was happening - but it was a compelling read.

I still have tears in my eyes. Thanks for this.
Six months ago I spent many hours with my family in a hospice as my dad waited for his call. There's comfort in sharing it, and your dialogue brought it back to me. Thanks.
This is powerful. I've no doubt God allows some people to hold on so they can see a family member or to die alone to spare their families. Jesus knows the perfect time to call each child home. We may not always agree with him, but I know he sees way beyond the capabilities of my human eyes. I enjoyed your take on the topic. I think your message is powerful and you had great descriptions too.
Wow---This was powerful and intense. Thanks for sharing this with us.

God bless~

Excellent work!

God bless~
Congratulations, Belinda! Well done. Your piece was so tender and draws the heart.

God bless - Trudy
Congratulations on your first place in the Beginners category, Belinda. Your piece had a wonderful mixture of sights and smells.
Congratulations on your 8th place EC award, Belinda.

What a tender and emotional homecoming.
Congratulations! This is a great story!