The Official Writing Challenge
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12/04/15
You put a lot of thought and work into this piece.

Good job.

God bless~
12/04/15
This is an unique approach to this topic. The title drew me in, but your words kept my interest through the story.
It is good that we look around at the world so we are not caught up by the world.

Many things can seem right by twisting His word.

Keep thinking and then writing. we all need it.
I think you made some great points in this piece. I liked the tone you created. It was obvious you were serious, but you also made me feel like I was listening to a dear friend. Nice job.