The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/15
Beautifully done.
God bless~
11/27/15
Well done. Keep it up.
11/28/15
Your poem told an effective story; however, I think you needed to add a few more commas, especially in the first few stanzas.
I really enjoyed this , It seems to apply to a "widowed" church who seems to have lost sight of their Bridegroom ,or even an "orphaned "country. Idk if that was quite where you were going with it, but that's my take anyways.
There's something to be said for persistence. Although I'm not sure if I totally understood it, I did appreciate it. I smiled at parts and you made me stop and think.
12/03/15
Congratulations, Caleb. I'm always happy to see your work place.
12/04/15
Caleb - Good to see you place. Congratulations. I enjoyed the second paragraph.

Keep up the good work.