The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/15
A very true sentiment and you expressed it very clearly and in a straightforward manner.
You are covering many truths at once in a "to the point" manner.

Thank you for sharing!
This is really lovely. I liked how God spoke to the MC. I suspect he whispers that in many ears. The only suggestion I would offer would be to put quotation marks around when God is speaking to make it clearer. I think you did a nice job on the topic and I enjoyed this artistic poem.
11/17/15
A wonderful poem. Asking the Lord to shield you from the distractions and temptations that can mar one's life is truly a step in acknowledging God's power to make you worthy of His love.
Your entry reminds me of the deep inner thoughts of David that I read in the Psalms.
Well done.