The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes, take the log out of our eye before we try to take the speck out of some other person's eye.

Read it slowly one more time and see if you can find any changes you would like to make.
There were many reminders in this piece of changing ourselves before judging others.

I would have used some showing in the opening paragraph to grab the reader's attention such as, My eyes,were fixed on the sinner. I stood ready to hurl the jagged rock at the adulterous woman.

Thank you for sharing.
Cyril, Congratulations on your Highly Commendable award in the beginning category
Cyril, Congratulations on your Highly Commendable award in the beginning category