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Topic: CHILL (10/29/15)
- TITLE: Chillin' a romance (with a poetic essay)
By douglas eckert
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
petrifiedly through the window of a popular potion palace at my local purchasing
thoughts and sorrows
of all of the disconnected data points that hang there...
like stars in the artificially polluted fake air...
they are more
numerous for me to count,
than are the
baskets, and baskets of bottles that line the tables everywhere.
milling about with oft chemically lobotomized stares...
lovingly rubbing these toxic counterfeit concoctions
on their skin....
and lustfully languishing for luster...while spraying them
in and on their hair.
apple, and this
one smells like pear!,....pumpkin, spice , and everything nice
This one an ocean breeze,
and this one a summer glade, a pine forrest, passion peach,
a log fire, or even a gingerbread man !"...
real smell that you can think of... that can be
conjured up out
of a store
THIS seems to be...
I haven't even yet began....
to connect to THAT cluster of dots, these OTHER defiling dots that are
....involving of !!!!!!
Satan ! the roaring lion's ! Humanity slaughtering plans.
When you finally come
to look at human skin...
at REALLY what it is...
and finally come
to realize that it's not just a portrayer of our beauty,
or what is holding us all in...
from the ends of our
toes, to up way past our chin.AND that it's ACTUALLY quite a porous membrane through
which many,many,MANY chemicals into our bloodstream
take a "look see"
at the ingredients
on all of those scathing,bathing bottles of perfumes "fragrances", washes, splashes and lotions
that everyone seems
to love to expose
to their ever
or spice, or even
ANYTHING remotely nice...
But rather a toxic,
that your skin
is bathing and
These "masterfully crafted" chemical "perfumes" AREN'T JUST a counterfeited smell...
carcinogenic,biochemically imballancing,seemingly....... lobotomizing,liver clogging
conjured up and
You start to maybe get a real whiff of the source of my great sorrow and chagrin...
in which Satan
is able to obscure
from us this seemingly logical connection of a few simple data points .....it's these GEE ??? spots, that make me feel like...I'm
on the outside of a
bad whore-er flick
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