The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this! If this is a specifc tree that really exists, perhaps you could name it, or give its location for your reader. Some of us like to research such things!

I'm not sure of what you meant by ...All people and all the ages had passed before its presence, in a biblical sort of way...

Your last sentence about the "other tree" is very, very subtle. I got it (I think), that you are writing about the cross, but I wonder if it's a bit too subtle.

Love the time line rushing by in your central paragraph.