The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/15
This is very nice. One challenge I had, while reading this was that although many of your sentences used beautiful metaphors, others were written in a more colloquial tone and the discordance was unsettling. The overall effect is pleasing, but keeping your article in the same, consistent tone will help its effect increase! Keep writing
10/25/15
A nice poem that conveys many images and thoughts. Good job.
Yes, words, thoughts and ideas can come from all sides. We must run them all by what the Bible says so this will follow:.
Do show me Lord Your precious jewels
And make them crystal clear; let me marvel
To follow Your way, narrow may it be
More joy to serve You Lord I pray.

We just have to be careful what we choose to believe and do.