The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/15
An interesting entry. I like your thought process.

Your use of commas needs work. I recommend you check out Writing Lessons by Jan on the Forum. There are at least two lessons. They are not long, and you will reap big rewards.

Example of your writing:
I can think reason and speak.

Correction with proper use of commas:
I can think, reason, and speak.

Keep working at writing. You have talent that is waiting to emerge.
10/23/15
This is very clear and a good point. You have "clarified" your views on your identity in Christ. Keep writing!
One weeks writing time does not allow for perfecting condensing words for an even line length.

It is usually easier for me to read a poem with similar line lengths.

I am thankful that an understanding of Acts 2:36 where we are told that God made Jesus both Lord and Christ. When we gladly receive these words of Peter (Acts 2:41) our faith will produce actions causing Jesus to become our Savior.

Our life will clarify whom we belong to.