The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/15
Very nice! A sweet reminder of our Ultimate Destination
10/15/15
I really think your poem conveyed a clear message--Jesus is always waiting for his child to return home. My favorite stanza was number eight.

Sometimes it seemed like the 3rd line in the stanza was too long compared to the first two.