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10/08/15
What a lovely tribute to your mother. I felt your love and care for her. Thank you for sharing this story
10/08/15
An eloquent tribute to a mother. I liked how you incorporated the name Ardelle (meaning zest) into the story.
10/08/15
Very touching story. I agree with Ardelle, that we should do everything as unto the Lord. He should always be on our minds and hearts.

You did a great job and a winner for sure.

All the best. :)

P.S. I am also a fan of Mercy Me. Great band.

10/09/15
Your story touched me deeply as I just lost my mother May 13 this year. So, barely five months ago...and I read this through tears, but with a big smile as well.

Beautiful job with the topic your lovely sentiments were a beacon of light as I read your words.

It says
work of fiction at the end of your story, but it held such an authentic tone I wonder if that was an oversight.

If this is indeed true...my sincere and deepest condolences to you and yours.

God bless~
The was a touching and moving piece. You made is feel you were honoring your own mom even though it was a work of fiction.
Well written as a beginner.
10/15/15
Congratulations on your 1st place award in Beginners. I can't wait to read more of your stories.
10/15/15
Congratulations on your 1st Place ranking. Well deserved.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 20th overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.