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What a lovely tribute to your mother. I felt your love and care for her. Thank you for sharing this story
An eloquent tribute to a mother. I liked how you incorporated the name Ardelle (meaning zest) into the story.
Very touching story. I agree with Ardelle, that we should do everything as unto the Lord. He should always be on our minds and hearts.

You did a great job and a winner for sure.

All the best. :)

P.S. I am also a fan of Mercy Me. Great band.

Your story touched me deeply as I just lost my mother May 13 this year. So, barely five months ago...and I read this through tears, but with a big smile as well.

Beautiful job with the topic your lovely sentiments were a beacon of light as I read your words.

It says
work of fiction at the end of your story, but it held such an authentic tone I wonder if that was an oversight.

If this is indeed sincere and deepest condolences to you and yours.

God bless~
The was a touching and moving piece. You made is feel you were honoring your own mom even though it was a work of fiction.
Well written as a beginner.
Congratulations on your 1st place award in Beginners. I can't wait to read more of your stories.
Congratulations on your 1st Place ranking. Well deserved.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 20th overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.