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08/20/15
A beautiful love story, especially since it is true. My only suggestion would be to use your wife's name in the beginning of the story. I was confused about who the narrator was until the second paragraph.
A beautiful love story. You and your wife cherishing each other through all your difficulties is truly a gift from God.
08/27/15
Congratulations on your 2nd place in Beginners, Jeremy.

Your story was so heartwarming.
Congratulations on your second place win. This was a beautiful story about love.