The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/15
What a sad story in the midst of such beauty. I really liked your comparison of a wedding dress to a waterfall.
08/16/15
Good descriptions and interesting (although sad) story. I suggest that you intersperse your spiritual thoughts throughout your writing, rather than tacking it on the end.
08/19/15
You did some great descriptions, but to me it was too much! So sad about the missionary though.