The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 280 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
I really liked your analogies of why a soul is similar to a photograph. A thesaurus could have expanded your word choices such as photograph, soul to add a bit of variety. Overall, a thought provoking story.
07/24/15
I liked the way you pointed us to truth, but as previous reader noted, you over-used words when you could have substituted others. It would be even more enjoyable with those few changes.
07/25/15
Lovely job. I enjoyed this entire piece.

God bless~
07/25/15
I really liked your concept of our life being a series of pictures.

Red ink: soul's photographs not souls photographs.