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07/23/15
This story brought tears to my eyes. What a special moment between grandfather and grandson.

Red Ink: I think you meant grandchild rather than grandchildren when you talked about just Charlie.
07/24/15
This was a heartwarming story. All grandpas should be so loving, putting family ahead of all else. Actually it is a lesson for all of us, not just grandpas.
I also noticed the mistake mentioned in the previous critique.
07/25/15
Touching and loving. I enjoyed this entire piece.
Thank you.

God bless~
07/26/15
This is a nice piece, even though the grandson is ailing. The love of the Grandfather shines through and takes away from the sadness of illness.
07/30/15
Congratulations Loni on your 3rd place award in Beginners. It really is a touching story.
07/31/15
Loni, Congratulations.
This was such a lovely and touching entry.
God bless~