The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/15
I felt that you wrote well and it was an inspiring piece. Keep it up.
This would make a great devotional. To engage the reader right out of the gate, I may have begun with the twists and turns of the cathedral and how it compared with your life in the first several sentences.
07/25/15
Very well done. I really enjoyed this.

God bless~
07/25/15
I thought your piece was a fascinating observation of your life compared to a
photograph.

Red Ink: I also thought your story should have begun with the tower. I also noticed that you had a tendency to switch from the past tense (beginning) to the present tense (end) and vice versa.
07/31/15
Congratulations! I really enjoyed this piece.
God bless~