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This is a fascinating story. You did a nice job of building the suspense. I can't imagine such a trip, but you really brought it to life for me.
07/09/15
Interesting and great story! You did a wonderful job with the topic and brought it to life in a grand way.

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God story....felt I was there with you!
This was an interesting story about times when they had wagon trains. Your grandfather sounds like an endearing man but has a little bit of fiestiness when something gets under his dander. Thank you for allowing me to learn about the Pioneer times.
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