The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/15
I like this!

You clearly drew from Is. 40:30-31, so it might be a good idea to put the reference at the bottom as an authors note.

Is. 40:30-31 is one of my favorite passages of scripture, and I really liked your take on it.
05/20/15
Really like the imagery, and the pulling from Isaiah. Nicely done.
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