The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/15
I'm glad you included the line about these steps NOT being so simple, because I was about to comment on how these really aren't easy things. :)

I think you would connect with your reader more if you talked about you and your spouse specifically worked through some of your problems. I realize you have a short word count. Maybe, in the future, expand on one or two things like this, and give personal examples.

Nice job.
05/19/15
Good, practical advice. And I agree - NOT so easy :) Thanks for sharing.