The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/05
It's a nice point, but I think from 1st person, this would have been better, more moving.
Otherwise... it's still a good read...
Well done!
12/07/05
Good job, and I really liked the voice of God here. Consider a different title?

12/07/05
I liked the reality of her situation..especially where she realized she had not worked beside him..she was trying to find that she counted even alone..very nice thoughts and wriitng.:)
Hey, I really liked this voice here. Isn't God wonderful, he loves us beyond our words. By the way, I have lived this story in real life. I praise God for leading and guiding us beyond our own steps. THANK YOU
12/12/05
I enjoyed reading this Excellent story.

This is powerful, I Love this:
" The dark clouds rolled aside, bowing gracefully, as the glory of the Lord broke through. Chasing away all the shadows of fear. He filled up the empty spaces of HIS rich soil, that were left gapping from the harsh down-pour of the last days of winter. Nancy breathed deeply the nuance of God's everlasting love, becoming whole again."

O Yes, Good Write. "Nancy realized then,
Spring is just around the corner! "
Well Done. Thank You.