The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/15
Oh, I love the bits of humor in this, yet you still make your point very clear.

I'm one of those crazy ones who love working with kids. We always do a summer children's musical at my church, and I love helping out. 47 kids signed up so far, and we may get a few more. It's crazy, but it's also a ton of fun, and such a blessing.

I LOVED the last line.
05/19/15
Cute, clever, and fun - and great use of repetition. Enjoyed this!
Absolutely hysterically real! I prayed for children (I am sadly barren), and the next thing I knew was that I was to be the "Toddlers' Class" teacher - of twenty-two two and three year-olds! I learned quickly to be very specific in my prayers!

Your entry is worthy of being in the "Masters' Level". This was so entertaining and attention holding! I cannot wait to read more of your stories . . .

Hugs,

Judi
This is fantastic - the serious message well balanced with humour. You also showed the topic, along with the conflict and all that can be gained by going along with God's will.

I don't think you'll be in Beginners for long. Great piece!