The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/15
This is great! Would make a fun book for youngsters.

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05/01/15
This is such a clever take on the topic. I'm sure kids would really like the entertaining twist.
Entertaining, creative approach to the topic.
05/02/15
I love a writer with a sense of humor. I was so afraid that in the moral, sinner was going to rhyme with a snake's dinner. Very fun.
NOTE: The story should read: Sammy descended down the slippery tree to get to the citadel for safety. Sorry about the slip up.
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