The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/15
Wow - this is beautifully written and powerfully said.

God bless~
05/02/15
Good job conveying her emotion. Powerful.
05/07/15
Congrats!
God bless~
05/08/15
Anyone who has ever tasted underserved wrath will be able to identify with the fear in the heart of the child in your story. I think you did an excellent job of setting the stage and depicting the characters. I could almost see it in my mind as it unfolded. I love the simplistic way you wrapped it up with hope and healing. Your message was clear and your story was well written.