The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/15
Thank you for sharing this poignant story that is both inspiring and touching.

God bless~
Powerful! The descriptions of the battle are so vivid you could touch it. Thank you for sharing your journey with us!
05/01/15
I am so sorry for your loss. You wrote about it very vividly and made a solid emotional connection with this reader. Well done. You used a lot of wisdom in presenting both sides of the battle. If you'd only shown the positive side, I'd believe it's great you could trust God, but I 'd doubt that I could in that situation. You being honest and open in your writing makes hope accessible for me. Thank you.
This was a powerfully written story. I am sorry for the loss of your child if this a true story. The depth of emotions was illustrated throughout the story.
05/05/15
Beautifully written about a sorrowful time in your life. The contrasts between good and evil were vivid. Well done.
Congratulations on your 1st place win! I hope to see your stories in Intermediate.

God Bless
05/07/15
Congrats,
God bless~