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04/17/15
Wow- this piece was jarring and somber before getting to the uplifting conclusion.

Jesus' love and His strength will always provide the sustenance and breath we need in order to live, as you so clearly demonstrated in this powerful piece.

Thank you for sharing your heart with us.

God bless~
04/21/15
And this is only your second try at poetry? Honey, I've tried for years and have never even come close to this. Powerful. Gripping. Raw. The flow of it was fast-paced and the emotions poured out for everyone to see and feel. Well done.
Wow. Just wow. That was heart-wrenching and emotional. Hit rather close to home in some ways. Powerfully done. I don't think you will stay in Level 1 very long...
04/23/15
When this poem first took a jarring turn (and you know where that is) I was like...Wow...and then spellbound until the end. Raw and riveting.
04/23/15
Beautifully written and expressed. Opening the soul to healing. Allowing others to feel your pain, and then, the perfect conclusion. Forgiveness. Awesome.

Poetry in motion.