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This is a powerful, well-written story. Truly fits the topic!

God Bless
A moving story about how God protects us. He even sends angels to watch over us.

Tne day will come when you'll see your precious child again in heaven totally healed of any infirmaties.

Thank you for sharing such a painful time in your life with the readers so they can find comfort.

The only red ink on this piece is a few grammatical errors. If you use a number such as 34 in the beginning of your sentence, it should be spelled out as Thirty four.
Very well written. I was hanging on every word and sort of spell bound as I read. I appreciate the honesty in your writing.
Red Ink note: I understand your intent to emphasize words so that the reader can read them with emphasis. I think using italics instead of capitalizing the letters of the words might seem more natural and carry out your intent better. Just a minor thing!
Great job!
04/11/15
I am sorry for your loss. You show in your testimony that all things work together for good - even the tragic events we experience.
04/13/15
Thank you for sharing your heart with us. My heart broke reading your words, and I was shocked at the doctor's "callous" remark about your son.

You will see your son again one day, and he will be in his perfect spiritual body as everyone is in heaven.

I once heard a preacher say, "it seems so horrible when a baby passes on from this world, yet it is really a gift because the Lord wanted him back with Him to be safe from the evil in the world."

I often think about his comment when I hear of such tragedies.

I'm so sorry for your loss.

God bless you~
Congratulations!!
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