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04/11/15
Ah yes, the joys of water - truly a blissful thing. Water is the most miraculous of all creations it seems to me, no wonder it has such therapeutic effects on body, soul and spirit. I still can't fathom how two flammable elements, hydrogen and oxygen make water - its simply miraculous.
04/13/15
I love this entire piece!

I must tell you, I love water as well. It's peaceful roar by the seaside lulls me into tranquility, plus I agree with all of which you said, including for baptism...excellent job!


God bless~
This is really lovely. You did a wonderful job of creating a soothing atmosphere. You also really did a nice job of thinking outside of the box while nailing the topic.
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