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03/12/15
I really liked how you categorically raised questions and offered the "only solution" which is in the Lord at the conclusion.

Well done, and on topic.

God bless~
I also like how you offered the solutions to each burden. Jesus is our hope. You showed that Jesus is our shepherd. Well done.

God Bless
03/14/15
Well written and on topic - thanks for sharing.
Your last paragraph says it all in the life situations you described, especially these words: "When you have Jesus, you have Hope." When a person finally comes to believe in Jesus, repent of their sin and is baptized for the forgiveness of their sin they will receive the gift of the Holy Spirit who will begin to guide that person's walk with Christ. They will take on a new attitude of changing what they can change and accepting those things they cannot change. God can give peace and an attitude of contentment in spite of things they cannot change.

Good writing.
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