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03/05/15
Moving and powerful read.

Thank you!

God bless~
A very well written life story - written from the heart and to the heart of each reader.
This is a beautiful testimony. Your transparency and honesty is heart warming. You do a wonderful job of helping me see things from your POV.

I noticed a few little errors like missing quotation marks and some awkward sentences.
Don't hesitate to keep tweaking, especially with something this emotional. The more you rewrite the better it'll become, and an awkward sentence like this:Faith continues to believe even the circumstances aren’t conducive enough. could turn into something like this: Faith means that you continue to believe, even when the results don't look promising.

I think it's wonderful that you are able to be so candid with your feelings and experiences. I've no doubt God is using your story in ways you may never be able to imagine. Keep writing;you're doing a great job.

Jan's Writing Basics has some great tips for all levels of writers. If you seen them on the forums or haven't participated yet, I'd urge you to. She does a great job of responding to everyone who participates.
03/08/15
Thanks for sharing the beautiful account of faith in action even when tested by the fire of adversity. God bless you and your powerful testimony in the lives of many.
03/12/15
Caleb,
Congrats on a job well done.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 22 overall. Happy Dance!