The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/15
Well done and on topic.

Great job.
God bless~
Many things can bid us to envy but these we must all cast away.

I see you like to work with rhyming words. Keep at it.
02/24/15
Lots of helpful reminders in this contemporary poem. Thanks for participating in the Challenge! Keep writing...
This is a nice piece. You flash on different scenes creating a picture in my mind. Nice job.