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12/05/14
I love butterflies, so the title was a real draw for me. This is an excellent story. You have a way with words and the turn of a phrase. Fabulous. Keep writing!
12/10/14
Strikingly descript and filled with emotion, this piece creates a hunger for more. It sings of the beauty of transformation and new life, through which a soul may discover the glorious purpose for their existence. So glad I decided to flutter-by. ☺
A very creative approach to the topic, with excellent descriptions. Congratulations.
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12/12/14
Congratulations Cindy!

Well done.

God bless~
02/18/15
I love the smooth movements of the butterfly's growth, the vivid colors, and the build-up of tense emotions in your article. Anyone can easily relate to his own life transitions to your butterfly's transformations. Great job!