The Official Writing Challenge
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Good encouragement. Third stanza has an extra syllable or two? Wonder how this relates to the season of spring.
Your poem has some lovely sentiments. Work on more consistent meter, for a poem that really "sings."
Micely written but it did not seem to be about the season of spring.
I think even in a Spring full of drought, the title lets us understand that Jesus is the Spring of Living water. I agree with Jan again. Thank you for sharing. God bless ya, littlelight