The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/14
Beautiful story! I really enjoyed it, well done.

God bless~
Any mission trip is an adventure.

The Bible is filled with statements of God's will for us. Our life becomes an adventure when we try to live according to God's will each hour. (It is God's will that we be kind, love our enemies, do good, speak truth, sin not,.... There are more than 50 of these that can easily be seen as we study God's word.)

Keep writing where your heart leads you.
Great story! It was very "real".
11/26/14
Thanks for a great faith-affirming read.

Just on a purely presentation aspect, breaking the story down into bite-sized paragraphs would help make it more visually readable, and some fine-tooth combing with grammar.

That's definately by-the-by though. I enjoyed your story and how you wrote it.