The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This is some kind of story, perfectly aligning with the topic for sure!

Well done, it had it all. The build up the suspense and the ultimate climax. Perfectly executed in delivery and content.

Excellent piece of writing!!

God bless~
We read in a few minutes what it takes detectives months or years to figure out ... as the plot thickens.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaagh!! What happens next?????????? *gnaws fingernails*

Very suspenseful!
Oh wow. That's definately a suspenseful cant-read-fast-enough story. Well done!
Gripping writing, though I am personally a fairy tale girl. Not long for level 1, I think. :)
God bless~
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