The Official Writing Challenge
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Good one for the next time change. Pretty thorough list of things to consider. The swithching from you to us is my only nit.
Nice little devotional. Quite a few verbs are missing their past tense endings; clean those up to make this a great little piece.
"spring forward" was a little repetitive in a very small piece. A few "ed's" missing from words. Lots to think about in your message though.
Great, wonderful message: Thank you
I would have liked to have seen you embelish more on a few of your points that I liked. Like shedding our warm clothing, for instance. A few small errors in the English. Other than that, really nice! Thank you for sharing. God bless ya, littlelight
Good thought over all.. Remember to separate thought lines in Paragraphs with a space between, it helps in the reading.