The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/05
Good one for the next time change. Pretty thorough list of things to consider. The swithching from you to us is my only nit.
12/05/05
Nice little devotional. Quite a few verbs are missing their past tense endings; clean those up to make this a great little piece.
"spring forward" was a little repetitive in a very small piece. A few "ed's" missing from words. Lots to think about in your message though.
Great, wonderful message: Thank you
12/07/05
I would have liked to have seen you embelish more on a few of your points that I liked. Like shedding our warm clothing, for instance. A few small errors in the English. Other than that, really nice! Thank you for sharing. God bless ya, littlelight
12/07/05
Good thought over all.. Remember to separate thought lines in Paragraphs with a space between, it helps in the reading.