The Official Writing Challenge
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Decision is heartwarming writing. When she cried her sorrow I could see her heaving in an emotional crisis. Very good.
Well put together story.
11/07/14
Excellent!!!! Powerfully executed in delivery and content. I thought this was realistic, the dialogue with the two ladies authentic,and the situation in the marriage, a good lesson to be brought forward.

I received chills through my body at the close of the story....LOVED IT! Excellent all the way through fo me!

God bless~
11/08/14
I loved this heartfelt story - thanks for sharing your creative spirit and spiritual gift. Keep writing!