The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/14
Beautiful story! I loved this.

God bless~
11/01/14
This is an intriguing story, with an angel as a main character on a rescue mission - very clever. The only thing I would suggest changing is this line: 'Her young prey was easily spotted' - because at first read it appears the girl is the angels prey which of course is not the case.