The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/14
Well written and well done. I believe you've covered the topic and kept us entertained as well.

God bless~
I believe you are a very creative author. The final thought I had when reading this inspiring story was "oh yes!" Keep writing.
10/26/14
Good job on this one! One sentence you may want to check the grammar over is this one: "Despite the appearance that the prince and his armies had the power again and ruled planet Tierra, another turn of events hit the final nail."
Keep writing!
Felt this was a very good interpretation that would appeal to Sci-Fi fans. A little embellishing with pictoral descriptions and the addition of subtle and intense battle scenes could turn this into a great short book or comic-style read. Although this story is Biblically, not Fiction, in some mainstream publishing Biblical supernatural is considered Science Fiction. Guess that's just because they can't explain it!
10/29/14
This is very creative. It could make a good introduction to the Bible for youngsters and adult who are not yet familiar with Scripture.