The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written and well done. I believe you've covered the topic and kept us entertained as well.

God bless~
I believe you are a very creative author. The final thought I had when reading this inspiring story was "oh yes!" Keep writing.
Good job on this one! One sentence you may want to check the grammar over is this one: "Despite the appearance that the prince and his armies had the power again and ruled planet Tierra, another turn of events hit the final nail."
Keep writing!
Felt this was a very good interpretation that would appeal to Sci-Fi fans. A little embellishing with pictoral descriptions and the addition of subtle and intense battle scenes could turn this into a great short book or comic-style read. Although this story is Biblically, not Fiction, in some mainstream publishing Biblical supernatural is considered Science Fiction. Guess that's just because they can't explain it!
This is very creative. It could make a good introduction to the Bible for youngsters and adult who are not yet familiar with Scripture.