The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - that was quite descriptive and deeply engrossing. It covered the topic quite well. There is a lot of info within this entry, and a lot to take in.

Quite creative!

God bless~
This is fantastic. I think you'll be in intermediate before long. Thank you for sharing.
Chillingly the truth. Your inventiveness is credible. Keep Writing! God Bless!
Well written, very descriptive and captivating. I hope you do well with this one.
While it is difficult to fully grasp the depth of the nature of evil and to calculate its depravity, I feel you have been very descriptive and credible. This is ironic, for this entry may be better suited to Horror or Suspense - this week's topic - than for Fantasy. I wonder if the judges might hold this one over for next week's assessments??? Unlikely I'm afraid, but you have done a great job.
I liked this line:

It's the girl who prays, it's the girl who has such heavy protection … surely she must be a prize, something to get hooks into.

Prayer in the life of a believer is so important.

Good job on your entry. I agree with Noel... maybe write chapter 2 for next week? :o)
Creative and thrilling! You have a blessed gift for storytelling - I look very much forward to reading more as you leap into Masters level . . .

Love in and through and because of Him . . .

1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
Excellent job her of presenting your experience with a demon in darkest description.

God bless~