The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/14
Thoughtful and humorous poem. I find it is quite difficult to relate what I am trying to stay within the confines of rhyme. As time goes on you may find this true as well, and move into writing prose that reads lyrically, but does not rhyme. In the meantime - keep working with rhymes, it is good practice and fun!
10/17/14
A good spread of material with a few biblical allusions thrown in for good measure. Enjoyable read.
10/18/14
I enjoyed this very much...well done, thank you.

God bless~
10/23/14
Congrats!

God bless~
10/23/14
HC - Congratulations!
A merry little ditty indeed. Love this.
Congratulations!

KJV 1 Timothy 3:16
"And without controversy great is the mystery of godliness: God was manifest in the flesh, justified in the Spirit, seen of angels, preached unto the Gentiles, believed on in the world, received up into glory."