The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/14
Whoa. That was striking and unusual. The subtle rhymes began to leap out at me partway through. It felt like a combination of prose and poetry, which I'd never seen before. WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!
10/11/14
You've crafted your story with brilliance which kept me intrigued wanting to read more.

Nicely done.

God bless~
Congratulations :)
10/17/14
Trace...congratulations!
Beautiful story.
God bless~