The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/14
This made me smile, well done in all aspects, delivery content and purpose.


Great job.

God bless~
I liked your human "dog". It didn't come to me until he was in the kitchen putting his nose into the hand of "Mom". This was entertaining.

Some dog lovers might not like the use of the smell of chocolate since it is said to be harmful to dogs. Maybe bacon even if it was in the afternoon.

The dog's feelings toward the cat might portray the feelings of some humans so you did this will.

You did well giving the dog human characteristics.

I liked it.
09/13/14
Great story....I loved how human-like you made the dog, even when it looked at the cat.

It is also a good reminder of why God gave us animals...to bring joy and comfort.

Awesome job!
09/18/14
Congratulations!
God bless~